Tellu

Well, this is certainly one of the better layouts I've ever seen on a freewebs site! But that doesn't mean it's good. The giant, unused space in the middle is really the thing that bugs me most. What's the point of all that space? There's no picture, no text... just a huge unused area. And what's worse, it causes me to have to scroll down for the real content. I also don't like the grid design here. The gird on the top image doesn't match up with the grid on the bottom, and it just suddenly cuts off when the div layer begins. I like the brushes at the top, but the mosaic effect just makes things look fuzzy.

Speaking of mosaics, the word "mosaic" is horribly misspelled on the image used for the layout. If you're going to use an image with the title of the page on it, please at least make sure it's spelled correctly.

I do find that this page is at least easy to navigate. I do, however, fail to see why the "omake" section or "media" section is called "taste." That makes absolutely no sense at all. o.O I also hate it when people link sections of their websites that don't exist yet. Either make it a different color or something (make it CLEAR that it's not a link), or don't even put it there. Why would I want to see a useless bit of text that does nothing but take up space? Linking things that aren't there yet is a BAD idea; especially if those things aren't going to be there for a WHILE.

My final complaint about this site is the red titles/dividers. I thought EVERYONE knew that red and pink don't go together. o.O

Viluy

Main page:

The layout is nice, although some of the images appear to be missing for me. *slaps browser* Anyway, the wording is all right, if worded a bit differently than I'm used to. It's obvious this person's first language is not English so I'm making a few allowances for that. That said, here are some glaring errors that need to be fixed: 'phrases is' = 'phrases are'; critic = criticism; personalinfo's = personal info; senshi's = senshi...

Magical category: Attacks main page

Spelling and grammatical errors: 'a attack' = an attack; 'can you' = you can; mpeg's = mpegs

For the attacks which are listed, there seems to be a bit of confusion between Moon Healing Escalation and Moon Princess Halation. The title for Moon Princess Halation (on that page itself) is given as Moon Healing Escalation. That should probably be changed. Other than that, the attack info is fine.

Inner Senshi:

Tsukino Usagi/Sailor Moon

Spelling and grammatical errors: clumzy/clumpzy = clumsy; broach = brooch; descrips = describes; togheter = together; Theraphy = Therapy

There are a few inaccuracies in the first statement describing Usagi/Serenity/Sailor Moon. The Queen of Earth wasn't Beryl, she just assumed the title after taking over everything on Earth and trying to do the same with the Moon Kingdom. Plus Endymion wasn't saving Serenity as such, she was trying to save him, and they both got killed by Beryl. I guess that depends on your interpretation of it, but that's how I saw it. :)

Serenity's mother was Queen Serenity, not Neo Queen Selene. Selene is the historical name for the goddess of the moon, and Neo Queen comes into it later when Usagi/Sailor Moon becomes NeoQueen Serenity during the time of Crystal Tokyo.

Mizuno Ami/Sailor Mercury

Spelling and grammatical errors: 'had get' = 'got'; grow = grows; descrips = describes; friendness = friendliness?; swat = swot

Swot isn't exactly a good term for Mercury. It has negative connotations (basically, it's a negative meaning). I'd use studious as a word to describe her, more than swot. *chuckles* Not all of her attacks are listed, but they're still accurate.

Hino Rei/Sailor Mars

Spelling and grammatical errors: allways = always; descrips = describes; friendness = friendliness; teaseful = teases

Not all of the attacks are listed, but the ones that are listed are accurate.

None of the other links work (yet) in the information section and very few of the links work for the rest of the sections. There are no glaring errors on any of the other pages to speak of. All in all, I'm impressed with this site, as the webmaster obviously makes the effort to do well, even though she's not a native English speaker.

Eudial

Hello Everyone! Eudial here and another review for all. hehe. Lets get started. Multimedia, here i come!

Picture of Chibiusa on the main page is nicely done. It fits with the theme well.

Ok, well, the first section under Attacks is wrong. Moon Healing Escalation is written twice. The second was written under Moon Princess Halation.

Ok, in regards to information, the pictures used look grainny. I would suggest getting a better picture or prehaps your scanner isn't working properly. I can only comment on the first three senshi as it seems all the others arent done yet. >.>

Alrightty...the multimedia section doesnt exist, along with about two-thirds of the "taste" section. In "Graphics," the pictures are nice, however, a few aren't displaying. *grumble*

Errrr yes...in regards to multimedia...not too good as there isnt much multimedia at all. Sry, I rate this poorly.