The Sailor Moon Pocky Box : Reviews

Green with Envey

Date Reviewed: November 26, 2006

Category: The Ugly

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Layout & Design

Is the layout intuitive and easy to navigate? Is it compatible across all browsers and resolution? Is it aesthetically pleasing?

Ptilol

I am going to sum this layout up in a very short review here. Its about Tellu, wonderful. However it is a Freewebs premade layout that is available to ANYBODY who signs up an account with Freewebs. Nothing to talk about because of this and definitely nothing to write home about.

Written Content

Is there lots of written information? Are all profiles, back story, and other textual content accurate? Does the site offer fanfiction or other miscellaneous written content?

Tellu

Oooh, a site about me! Unfortunately, it's off to a bad start. The title of the site, "Green with Envey," obviously has an incorrect spelling right there in it. Disappointing. All it takes is a spell-checker! Although there are other grammatical and spelling errors here and there, none is quite so striking as the misspelling in the page title.

The stats page is... weird. First of all, it says that the web authors "assumes" Tellu to be in her "early thirties." What? I never got that impression; she seems a lot younger than that. And anyway, it's generally a very bad idea to make assumptions when you're writing stats. Scrap that section! The brief summary isn't really much of a summary; it doesn't really provide all that much information. I'd definitely like to see more here; if I was reading this for the first time, I think I would be totally confused about Tellu's role. This little summary needs to be fixed! Add more details, and try to stay away from generalizations and bad grammar.

There's a page with info on the other Witches, but it's VERY limited. Well... that's kind of an understatement. There's hardly anything there! That page is actually a little pointless. The page about Tellu's outfit is the same... it really doesn't provide enough detail to be useful to anyone. It also says that the Materials Collection says vines can grow out of Tellu's veins. WTF??? The Materials Collection absolutely does not say that or anything like that. How completely random!!

Visual Content

What kind of visual content is offered? Is it efficiently organized and intuitively accessible? Are all visual media offered legally?

Viluy

Media...ok...so I'm SUPPOSED to be reviewing media, but there isn't anything to review. Sure there are pictures, but most of them don't even load! And what's with the Pig Latin...honestly, I'm not a big fan of that, it's cute...but no.

So to put it bluntly...the media here...stinks.

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